Sylvan,
Really nice driving!
Hrant's comments on Turn 5 are spot on, that is the one area that I thought that needed the most improvement.
Making use of the most of the inside berm on the apex of turn 12 and going over the outside berm between 14 and 15 is the fastest line through there so as long as they don't have any cones to block the area, it's all good
Just remember that if you ever do a track day in the wet you will want to avoid the painted surfaces so you will more than likely revert back to what used to be the late apex classic line entering 11 and 14 as well as the one at turn 8.
In regards to Hrant's comments about the early turn in at other areas of the track. It all has to do with how fast the car is going through the turn and wether or not the car is at the limit of adhesion and is slipping/drifting through the apex or not. It is kind of hard to explain to people who have not experienced it before, but from your video it seems that you are already doing it at some turns like turn 11.
The attached video is from one that I took at Thunderhill on Tuesday that might provide a reference as far as the line goes for your next track event with the Cyclone. It should also give you an idea about the changes in the turn in point once you get the car to be on a slip/drift before hitting the apex.
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